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adnama
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posted April 07, 2005 04:14 PM |
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my lovely storey
hope u like whot i've doun on it.
A Christmas Tale
Like meny other Christmas tales mine starts on Christmas Eve but that’s ware the similarity ends.
It was the night before Christmas, and all threw the house nothing was silent not even the mouse, the floorbords ware screaming. The windows ware screeching. The house was a cacophony of noise, pain, fear and of putrefaction. If you ware to look at the house from the road you would see the house alive with what looks like a horrific grimness. The rooms behind the windows apear to be filled to the brim with blood. But if you ware to
See it you would not belive you’r eyes you would just go straighte home and tell your family the weird thing you’d just seen or keep quiet and hope that you really ware just seeing things
In one of the bedrooms ware the children ware sleeping, there came a scream that shuck the house. the pairents ware there in a flash to see what was the matter but there was nothing to see for the scream did not come from that room. It came from another room on the other side of the house, in Uncle Carl’s room. (but his body would never be found!) Having been woken up by the noize that had souned around the house. Beliving that he was amaganing the souneds he pepered to go back to sleep when something he sore in the corner of his eye made him sit up. In the corner of the room there was a shadow that should not have been there, apone further inspection it appeared to be a child. He got out of bed and crossed the room to the window ware the soposed child was cawaring. As he got nearer the child he became aware that somting about the child was not rigth, not nateral, the neera he got to the child the more he beegan to release that it was not a child. It wasn’t even human or a lest not any more. Try as he might he could not stop him self from advancing towords it. Closer and closer he got to that thing , that ghost. He could not stop. Ever advansing he knew his fate, he was breathing his last breths. He came to a stop in frunt of the ghost. Now he could see what it truly was, a sight to horrible to discribe but he had no breath left to scream! The ghost child reached out to tuch him he wanted to recoil but couldn’t. As the ghost child touched him he manged one finel blood curdling scream and then he was dead! But his body will never be found. His scream endid the horrfic sounds that ware sounding around the house. every one in the house who had been distared by the noise all just turend over and went back to sleep beliving that thay ware just hearing things.
i might just let read you the rest when i get it done.
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aeries
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posted April 07, 2005 08:16 PM |
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Raindeer Tale
Like most Chistmas tales this doesn't start on chist - mas night; but on Christ - mas morning! Down by the lake not a creature was sturing not even a snake. A crocodile who went by the name of Charles, he was in the shallowly lake preparing for his breakfast and on his dinner plate he wanted santa himself but there was only one 'tiny' snag he was guarded by his trusted men, the one's who new him well - his raindeer.
Charles glared at snack, he was feeling hungry - he take of the raindeer and he was quite prepared to do afterall he quite hearty appatite.
Santa was locking up the raindeer for the day, except Rodney he was look out duty - looking out for intruders especially crocodiles. There was a ruslte in the bushes, Charles lerched towards his victim leeping out of the shadows, His jaw realising razor sharp teeth. They seth on to Rodney's throat, blood oozzing out - he tasted absoluted delisous - Rodney never saw him coming. Then he picked off the others one by one down to santa - he stalked his pray up behind his shadow, when he was about to snap a red beam of light appeared over Santa and like you see in those old sci - fi films a flying sauca was above his head; Santa was beamed aboard and a voice said: "We have dinner captain", so at the end Charles never had Santa on his dinner plate - he watched as the sauca flew away into the day's sky and Santa's raindeer were never seen again!
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I am the warrior, bow to me or die so that little retched Adnama better watch out!
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
the one & only mad sorcerers
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posted April 09, 2005 01:00 PM |
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it's ok
youre storey is a quite emusing! just posting to let u know my thinking on it. you could of potrad in deatile the killings of the other raindear, but that would or made it a bit gorey and i think you ware aming for a piss take. it is a lovley piss take mined you. sorry that i dont have another part of my storey compleited but i got a new game resantly and have being pulling all nighters so i havent had the time but the next part is nearly done so i shall post it very soon u never know ther might be more than one pearson reading it. please let me know youre opinions i like to get feedback, but i love to get nice feedback and complements so enjoy and be nice. or i will turne you all into froggs!
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aeries
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posted April 28, 2005 04:34 PM |
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Edited By: aeries on 28 Apr 2005
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Candy's Sweet Revenge
Heres a little story for you.
Part one.
Once there was a girl called Candy who had chain locks down her hair, one day as she was walking home from town she met this perculiar looking stranger who was walking on the same side of the road, he was tall and skinny, 'no good' she knew instantly.
He brushed up against her and gave a smile as he walked by, Candy was on the look out as her mom told her to be, they needed fresh meat for the pot, someone who was not tall and not skinny, but nowadays a person like that was hard to find. Since the new election of goverment (that happened every quarter of a century or so) they had banned all the production of sweets and chocolates and even meat. They had ordered the general public to become 'fruitariens' as the new president, thats right 'the royal family was abolished after Prince Willard abducated for a german and Harrieta not being groomed for the role turned the opptunity to be ruler down, that is when all the uproar since the cival war started and this country finaly became a republic and northen irland returned to eire.
Candy carried on walking and then there was a stroke of luke she remember her old headmaster - the school had closed down but he lived in the ruins and that wasn't far from where she was heading.
The school was not how she remember, the building was lucky if half had suvived. There was a tall, skinny man waiting for Candy at the entrance, it was the man from before - he had a sinister smirk on his face as if he knew what she had come here for, when he brushed up against her he had left his impression on her - he knew where she was heading and what she was heading for, Wesly was one of the remaining hunters.
He would go out and search for those who had been infected by a drug called 'ohurs', he could smell them Candy was one who had been infected to this 'new' way of life. She was in but a mere dream of her reality of which she wished would happen, she had no idea she was asleep and it was this goverments intension to keep it as such but there was a way to wake her - simply pull the plug as to say to the root of her dream make him pay for what he put her through, if this was indeed a dreamworld anything can happen.
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
the one & only mad sorcerers
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posted April 29, 2005 12:38 PM |
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Edited By: adnama on 3 May 2005
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part two chapter 1
Chapter one
It's too late!
In the morning light all appeared to be as it was the night before!
The children had gotten up quite early in their excitement, but they knew that they ware only allowed to open just two of there presents before diner but they didn't care for they knew the ones they wonted to open and they would quite happily play with them till the adults came down. Then they would eat their diner and eventually they would get to rip in to the rest of their presents. Uncle Tam and his wife Annie had gotten up just after the kids so that they could make a start on diner after-all every one was hear this year. And a family this big takes a lot of cooking for. Diner is nearly ready buy the time the other adults have dragged them salves out of bed.
Annie calls her twins Jamie and Jennie and tells them to set the tables one for the eight adults and the other for the children, ten not counting the unborn in Mara though she is barely more than a child her self. The tables are set quickly as the twins have requited their cousins Sammy, Michael, Jack, and lissey the only kids that are about the same age as them, as well as the only other ones willing to help them out. By the time everyone is sat at the tables and is having their diner some conversation has broken out at the tables. Lets start at the adult table:
Doreena: did any one hear that scream last night?
Annie: sorry dor but I didn't hear any thing last night. When I hit the hay I went right to sleep.
Doreena: its just me and David heard it and went rushing to are kids but nothing was wrong three and I just hoped some one had an explantion that's all.
David: huney why don't we ask Carl when he gets up. He is not normally this late!
Tam: it was ether your imagination or them pipes.
Doreena: yare you are probably right the central heating in hear is practaly stoneage.
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aeries
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posted May 06, 2005 04:24 PM |
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Candy's Sweet Revenge
Part Two
As she entered the school grounds, he was there - that man who had passed her out on the street, a hunter - one of the remaining hunters in this area. His fellow colleagues had retreated. She to him was one of the children that was not yet awake; he could smell her sleep on her breath. He said to her,
'I've been waiting Candy, shall we go in?' There was no reply, he took that as a yes.
As they entered the school her memories of her time spent here came flooding back, and believe me they were not happy memories. Candy stood quietly as if listening to the sound of her old school friends march up and down the old school corridors; the one way system in effect with anyone caught not abyiding being made to do extra detention.
Hunters after 'catching' their pray knew of only one way to set them free from the dream world and that was to face his/her most deepest and darkest desire and resist without temption, but that is harder said then done. Candy's temptation was a run of the mill - a super fast jet boat in a skimpy bakini! the James bond style but when your carrying a couple of Lara Croft style pistols who would refuse. If she makes it past rerusing her she has to face her old school science teacher, Candy will make him pay for for using her mom.
Steven (the hunter) has a lot of work to do to make not resist.
(Library time running out, continue later)
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I am the warrior, bow to me or die so that little retched Adnama better watch out!
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pandora
Honorable
Legendary Hero
The Chosen One
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posted May 06, 2005 10:17 PM |
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As fun as it's been watching you talk to yourself, I'd like to share a quote from the FAQ with you now :
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How Many Usernames Can I Have?
It is best if you have one. Be a real person that you are. You are allowed to have two usernames at Heroes Community. If we find you using three or more, we'll delete them and penalize you.
Please select one of the names to be deleted. Thank You.
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"In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends."
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
the one & only mad sorcerers
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posted May 10, 2005 04:41 PM |
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Edited By: adnama on 10 May 2005
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i am very sorry but me aries and enigma are frends off the net! i can not chouse to deelet one of my freionds profiles as i am not prive to thire passwords! and just so you know only me and enigma are dislexic, aries is quite good at spelling i often ask for hear help when we are at the librey! also the reasion we are freionds is because we think very simmalery we are abit like famley, and we very much enjoy posting on this site. have a look when enigma and aries sined up! i am quite lazy so if i was going to have more than 1 id i would have done it when i fairst sined up, but it is hard anough to keep up with one profile! i will try finde a pic of me and my frends if you whont wont get enigma in a picture but might be able to get one with ariesb but only if i get her permission. if i carnt get it i will just put one of me on if i can figger out how to do it!
besides whots the point of torking to my slef i do anoth of that at home!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
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posted June 01, 2005 11:43 AM |
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not just chicks...........
not just chicks ... but chicks with sick emagenations!
hay do you like the begining to my latest story?
even as the dark velvet of night came creaping into her small room, it made no differnce. life would never be the same againe the night had lost it's magic. she would never feel the cumfat of it's dark embrace, nore would the kiss of the sun worme her. in that one moment, the first bite, the first of meny that would change her. thay would take her life as she knew it. her sencis ware shifting to sumething primaland as achent as the land it's self. she should have felt honerd as only 50 are welcomed...no changed to and for this new life every centry. she is specail. but she diden't feel specail or horned, all she could feel was the paine, the paine of the change.
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lord_crusader
Promising
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UHU!! supreme!
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posted June 02, 2005 05:31 PM |
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I prefear a terror tale but I think you have good imagination... can you write a terror tale?
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
the one & only mad sorcerers
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posted June 10, 2005 02:30 PM |
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???
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I prefear a terror tale but I think you have good imagination... can you write a terror tale?
don't know give me an exsample and i will give it a try for you ! thats if you whont me to. so put one on and i will do my best k!
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Lord_Crusader
Promising
Supreme Hero
UHU!! supreme!
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posted June 11, 2005 07:44 PM |
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Well I'm not a good writer but I can give some things that I like in the horror tale...
- Weird things, make normal things looks scary, like "the circle" movie... I mean did you see the video tape?? is weird the makes look a chair like if was the hell, or a tree, or a simply fly in a mirror...
- No blood, I mean not muders or knifes or weapons or something like that, I mean something like twilight zone... strange and dark things happening around the main character...
- the main character looking for something that he or she wants a lot, but can find it...
this are the main rules  , I hope you can do a well job
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
the one & only mad sorcerers
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posted June 17, 2005 04:10 PM |
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i will
i'll start it to night so give me just a little time to get in to it i will try post a bit on monday so i hope you like it!? then i will have to do a bit of work on the other storeys ive posted!
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lord_crusader
Promising
Supreme Hero
UHU!! supreme!
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posted June 29, 2005 05:21 AM |
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I'm still waiting for my terror history
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
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posted July 13, 2005 04:30 PM |
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sorry
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I'm still waiting for my terror history
sorry about that it will be on the page befor the week is out. so pelease forgive the stupid prat how had forgotten about it. in sware on my fave site that i will put up the beggining at he very least.
i think that i might be calling it Alone, or sumthing like that. 
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Lord_Crusader
Promising
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UHU!! supreme!
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posted July 13, 2005 06:26 PM |
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I'm still waiting for my terror history
sorry about that it will be on the page befor the week is out. so pelease forgive the stupid prat how had forgotten about it. in sware on my fave site that i will put up the beggining at he very least.
i think that i might be calling it Alone, or sumthing like that.
ok
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
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posted July 16, 2005 11:40 AM |
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the bigginng
hear you go this is the beginng should have sume more later! enjoy
all alone
Jack was alone! Had he always been alone? He couldn’t remember! He was sure he hadn’t always been alone, he just didn’t remember ever meting any one at all! The house was so familiar yet so alien to him, he knew ware every thing was instingktathely but he had no memories not of the house or any thing at all relay! He had had a wired feeling for three days now; it was as if he had missed something while he was sleeping! He had decided that he would go out and see if he could find anybody out there! As soon as he stepped out of the front door he was comforted with a delarict town that wouldn't have looked out of place in a old ghost movie. He stepped of the porch and started walking to the next house there was a bicycle in the garden. The wheals ware still spinning as if someone had just got of it. A prickle of excitement and fear stabbed at him. He ran in to the house shouting "is any one there ……please answer me ….. please god let there be some one be hear!" running throw the house he is still shouting but of-corse nobody answers there was nobody there to answer him or was there!
He frantically sharshed more of the houses but all was the same nobody was there but he had a strange feeling when he came out of some of the houses. It was like he just kept missing someone calling for him!
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Lord_Crusader
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UHU!! supreme!
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posted July 20, 2005 08:56 PM |
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Hey! sounds great so far... for me is good history... is just like what I ask ...hope some more abour this hitory
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adnama
Adventuring Hero
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posted July 22, 2005 04:11 PM |
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Edited by adnama on 25 Mar 2006
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Hey! sounds great so far... for me is good history... is just like what I ask ...hope some more abour this hitory
yar i will right sume more of it for you and put it up soon. glad you like the storiey so far, well as promised hear it is:
He gave up on his search for the day and went back to his house for surely it was his house, it felt like it was his and that was all that matted to him at this time. He needed something to call his, other wise he would lose his mind. When he got back to his house darkness was just descending. As day turned to night he noted the chilling difference that night borate from the stark silence of day. The night was alive with sound that was both familiar and disturbing to hear, yet he couldn’t say what the noise was. It sounded like a hoard of people speaking in a hushed voice. But no there was no one out there he had just checked, it had to be the wind didn’t it? If he had looked out side he would have noticed that the plants in the garden ware not been move by any thing as there was no wind. He decided that he would go to bed and start his search agine in the morning. As he was climbing into bed he heard something that he couldn’t pass of as the wind, it was a scream! He had to find out who or what had screamed! He had to go out in to the dark and something tolled him that was dangers!!
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(cart spell DYSLEXIC)A Smille wont kill u. But I mightGo ahead smille!
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mistrelle
Tavern Dweller
The mythical being
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posted March 25, 2006 06:39 PM |
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storys
I'v been reading her storys for 15yrs now spelling aint getting any better but I'm so used to it translation is automatic. Storys are getting much better though
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