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fortress_fan
Disgraceful
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posted February 07, 2006 05:18 PM |
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Race: 6(Above adverage)
History: 4 (Below adverage)
Creatures: 8 (Very good)
Balance: 7 (Good)
Originality: 10 (Superb)
Total: 35 (Good)
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BoogieMan
Famous Hero
The John of Spades
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posted February 07, 2006 11:25 PM |
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Race: 8
Very good concept. The race is consistently centered around the Ice Queen which glues it all together. In this case, the little background is excusable: they live to serve the Queen.
History: 5
Unfinished, and it's a pity, too.
Creatures: 9
Very good line-up and descriptions.
Balance: 7
Some nice special abilities, great tactic potential. I didn't give you more because I suspect that all that damage reduction may cause imbalance despite the slow speed. Not to mention the weak flyer.
Originality: 8
Penalty: -1 for not having a hero
TOTAL: 36
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frakel
Adventuring Hero
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posted February 10, 2006 01:58 AM |
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Race: 7 (A nice concept allthough lacking description - but we get some of this from the history... Nice and fitting racial abilities and special building)
History: 7 (I like your style of writing. Some more details and off course an ending would have earned you more)
Creatures: 6 (A solid lineup)
Balance: 8 (Seems you have taken an effort to work on this)
Originality: 6 (Great potential, but lacking description of hero and other stuff costs you some points here.)
Overall: 33
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kookastar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
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posted February 10, 2006 11:15 AM |
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Race 8
History 2– race history graded in the race section (no real history)
Creatures 9
Balance 8
Originality 9
36/50
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Hellward
Tavern Dweller
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posted February 12, 2006 05:00 PM |
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Race: 7 (Overall creates a foggy overview of the race, many important facts are not explained, doesn't fit Ashan)
History: 5 (unfinished, hardly fit Ashan, affect the world too much)
Creatures: 8 (wolves not tamed, 2nd & 3rd seems like elemental (being of pure ice), wolf is stronger than the dwarves???, giant - also a bit similar to disciples, units history & alliance reasons aren't well explained)
Balance: 8 (nice abilities but too weak, and seems like "borrowed" from Disciples, nice inner-balance)
Originality: 6 (loans from: AoW II, Everquest & Disciples)
Total: 34 I like the idea of half-goddess (with may be just an elf), but it do not fit Ashan... Anyway i prefare your idea than creating 8th dragon god in the world of 7 dragon gods.
To be more obiective I've decided to rate all dwarvish towns at once (simillary as Fargoeth did).
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Zsa
Famous Hero
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posted February 12, 2006 07:22 PM |
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History: 4 You started so good, and after that ... 
Race: 7 I like a dwarf race, and your idea with the ice queen is not bad.
Creaturs: 8 Liked most of your creatures, the town didn't feel very dwarfish tho. Didn't like your lvl 2 units that much.
Balance: 8
Originality: 8, overall pretty interesting.
-1 for missing some stuff
34 overall, decent town, good job.
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FriendOfGunnar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
able to speed up time
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posted February 13, 2006 10:32 PM |
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Allright, I’m back for round 3
Let’s do this
Permafrost
Race( 3+4 )=6
History(2 + 4)=6 history was uninspiring
Creatures(2 +5 )=7 creatures were uninspiring
Balance(2+ 3)=5 special skills were uninspiring
Originality=5
I’m sorry, I like dwarves but I thought this faction was uninspiring
(minus one for no flag)
Total Score=28
How I graded these:
Race (Originality [1-5]+Compatibility with HOMM5 universe[1-5])
History (How interesting is it to me [1-5] +Compatibility with HOMM5 universe [1-5])
Creatures (Originality [1-5] +Internal Consistency [1-5])
Balance (are the special skills inventive [1-5] + Does it have a variety of flyers, shooters, walkers, spell-casters [1-5]
Originality (all the originality scores added up and divided by two. This means that creativity counts twice. [1-10])
35 to go
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Valeriy
Mage of the Land
Naughty, Naughty Valeriy
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posted February 23, 2006 10:35 AM |
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by ThE_HyDrA
Race: 8
History: 6
Creatures: 9
Balance: 8
Originality: 9
Overall: 40
Comments: This town is a unique twist on the classical perception of Dwarves, and is successful in its job. It is a shame that the history is incomplete, because the modern ages of the Dwarves would have been very interesting to follow. The creations you have manufactured for the creature line-up are also very original and suited to the town’s mentality. The idea of an over-arching ‘Ice Queen’ fosters an original approach to the town. The creatures are balanced in the early levels, but the special abilities seem to increase drastically in the last two levels. Had the history been developed further, this could have been an outstanding town. As it stands, the town is excellent, though it needs some polishing (e.g. Hero type, measured abilities).
TheNordicKing: 37
Gnoll_Mage: 39
Fargoeth: 38
Phoenixzs: 33
emberwild: 33
fortress_fan: 35
BoogieMan: 36
Frakel: 33
kookastar: 36
Hellward: 34
Zsa: 34
FriendOfGunnar: 28
Average: 35
TOTAL: 75
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