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Vinius
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Hero for a rent
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posted January 09, 2006 08:48 AM |
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ICTC: SWAMP
SWAMP
LOOK AT NEXTS POSTS! HERE WILL BE NEW UPDATES!
"God, honour, homeland"
>Aka: Forestry People
>Associated colors: Red and blue
>Worship: Humans - Religion of Ernoth's Church, Lizardmans and Gnolls - natural gods (sun, moon, stars)
>Core philosophy: "In God we trust" - forestry people is very religious and nobility.
>Country / kingdom: Great Forestry Kingdom
>Capital city: Forestria
>Key symbols: WINEDI (simbol of GFK), SITCHI (simbol of Religion of Ernoth's Church)
- WINEDI
- SITCHI
>Heroes: Sylvan Elder (magic), Forester (might)
>Locations: woods, forests, swamps, glades
>Magic: Base of forestry magic are offensive spells (poisons, curses, creepers) and healther spells (neutralization poisons)
>King: Adalbert Barrowpine - the offspring of Prince Barriwpine (from four continents)
>Faction info: the rulers of GFK are humans with gnolls and lizardmans participation. They busted many of forestry monsters. Forestry people consist knights and other forestry humans (wood-distillers, beekeepers). Rulers religion is Religion of Ernoth's Church. Lizardmans and gnolls proffes natural gods. Forestry people likes Sylvan Elves and villagers of Holly Gryphin Empire.
History:
694 YSD
Ov von Sikus II unites all forestry humans, gnolls, reptiles and monsters.
- Ov von Sikus II vel Vinius
722 - 729 YSD
Ov von Sikus II wages war with elves, who want capture their territories. Forestry people wins.
739 YSD
Ov von Sikus II dies. Louner the Dragonrider mounts the throne.
744 - 754 YSD
Great Forestry Kingdom wages war with barbarians. After many battles Louner wins the war.
756 YSD
Barbarians returns, but Forestry People with Elves quickly destroys their.
784 YSD
Louner the Dragonrider dies. In Great Fprestry Kingdom Prince Barrowpine and Zenon III fight for throne.
789 YSD
Prince Barrowpine mounts the throne and destroys Zenon III.
- Prince Barrowpine
825 YSD
Prince Barrowpine dies. His child, Hregory Barrowpine mount the throne.
827 - 832 YSD
Great Forestry Kingdom wages war with Academy. In first phase of war Academy wins. Gregory Barrowpine mobilisates greatest priests, mages and druids - Sylvan Old mans. They have decisive annefc on war. Great Forestry Kingdom wins!
- Sylvan Elders - mages of Great Forestry Kingdom
883 - 965 YSD
Gregory Barrowpine dies. Porewit Barrowpine continous rules to his dies. Adalbert Barrowpine mounts the throne.
Creatures
1.Gnoll (mlee)
upg. Elite Gnoll (mlee)
It's gnoll with leather armor and flail. Basic GFK's infantry.
2. Lizardman (first attack)
upg. Lizardman Archer (area attack)
Lizardman has heavy armor and halabard. Lizardman archer has little armor, dagger and bow.
3. Ranger (area attack, no punishmans for hand-to-hand fight)
upg. Fighter (area attack, +30% attack vs monsters, no punishmans for hand-to-hand fight)
Ranger is strong man, who has armor, sword and bow. It's elitist GFK's troop.
4. Basilisk (20% chances for petrification)
upg. Great Basilisk (35% chances for petrification)
Basilisk can turn creatures into stones.
5. Wyvern (35% chances for toxic attack)
upg. Toxic Wyvern (45% chances for toxic attack)
Wyvern has toxic spine in the end of tail. It's very dangerous.
6. Forester (takes spells, higher morale +1, hates Shadow Withes and Monks)
upg. Sylvan Elder (takes spells, higher morale +2, regeneration, hates Shadow Withes and Monks)
Sylvan Elders are the best wizards in Great Forestry Kingdom. Everybody is shaman, priest and magic.
Better image coming soon!
7. Vyrm (attack on 2 enemies, 99% chances for toxic attack, reststance for magic and toxic attacks)
upg. Great Vyrm (attack on 2 enemies, 99% chances for toxic attack, fear, reststance for magic and toxic attacks)
Vyrm is the strongest GFK's creature. He can belch acid and poison. He isn't real dragon, but he's relationship with him.
More informations and images for creatures later!
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News: I add "heroes".
News: I add OvSII's image and creatures' description!
News: I add all creatures images.
News: New skills!
Special buildings
Statue of Glory
When heroes bring Great Artifact into the city/town, villagers will bulit great Statue of Glory - big object made of gold and stone. Statue of Glory give morale +5 for deffenders, all heroes have 1000 Exp, all creatures have bigger statistics.
Captain's quarter
When city/town is attacked and in city isn't hero, the Cptain is bringing of castle's defence. He has all parametrs and he can cast spells, but he can't use artiffacts. His experience grow up with new battels.
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Ov von Sikus II
vel Vinius
vinius.prv.pl - about King's Bounty (in polish).
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Oakwarrior
Famous Hero
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posted January 09, 2006 11:43 AM |
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You should rename Forestry, as it is not close to an unit's name, as it sounds more like an ability. And Sylvan Old Man could be Elderly Sylvan, Sylvan Elder or Elder Sylvan.
Is the second symbol supposed to look like a carrot?
Looks cool though.
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Vinius
Hired Hero
Hero for a rent
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posted January 09, 2006 07:36 PM |
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re:
OK, but translate info english polish "dziad borowy" or russian "leszni" is very difficult.
No, it isn't carrot
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I'm waiting for opinions.
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Ov von Sikus II
vel Vinius
vinius.prv.pl - about King's Bounty (in polish).
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TheNordicKing
Adventuring Hero
Dark Lord of the Smith
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posted January 09, 2006 08:48 PM |
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Its sounmding great so far, but I think the heroes are a bit out of order, as in my opinion the slyvans are a lot different from the lizard men and the knolls.
Great ideas!
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katarraktis
Hired Hero
A Greek semi-god
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posted January 10, 2006 09:54 AM |
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very good.
i like the pictures also.
i missed the fortress creatures in h4.
hope to see some of them in the future.
especially my favourite Gorgons.
JUST ONE comment.
you could use something else than the gnolls as the first creature,some serpent-like weak creature.
but that is jyst my humble opinion.
good work.
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Vinius
Hired Hero
Hero for a rent
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posted January 10, 2006 04:22 PM |
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Edited by Vinius on 10 Jan 2006
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Religion of Ernoth's Church
A few words about humans' religion.
This religion was probably owns as far back on Terra, VARN-4 CRON and four Continents, but we now: RoEC was owns on Ernoth. We have a little informations about it. Followers have one God, his name was "This, who Gave us attestation on third day". Their symbol is SITCHI and cross. Priests hates Elrath's followers. Thay are heretics and heathens. Followers of RoEC have 2 rules: duty for God, duty for brothers. They are honorous and friendly.
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Oakwarrior
Famous Hero
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posted January 10, 2006 07:07 PM |
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Good idea bringing back one of my favoured part from Heroes 2.
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Vinius
Hired Hero
Hero for a rent
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posted January 10, 2006 07:20 PM |
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Edited by Vinius on 11 Jan 2006
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And the best of...
The artistic vision of Greaf Forestry Kingdom!
[url]http://spm.cba.pl/castle.jpg[/url]
Author of this beautiful picture is Andy Simmons.
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I'm waiting for Your opinions. Please!
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Vinius
Hired Hero
Hero for a rent
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posted January 12, 2006 03:22 PM |
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Edited by Vinius on 12 Jan 2006
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Sylvan Elder
the best vision of Sylvan Elder.
http://spm.cba.pl/dziad2.jpg
^^^Here is full size image^^^
I'm waiting for Your comments and opinions about my work!
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 12, 2006 10:28 PM |
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I like picture of GFK,but one advice Vinius.If you want people to help you with ideas and comments,you have to help them too with yours suggestions and comments about THEIR town.
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olMighty
Hired Hero
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posted January 15, 2006 04:49 PM |
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wow can't belie that the swamp town could be back after all, the creature ideas are good , but that elven(sylvan ) archer should be in some other tow, sorry , but that's my opinia, and that pic showing an awesome town is quite good , it really reflects the bases of H5, but alsoi not very suitable for this tow, I mean that castle ...I don't see many of u'r creature getting inside, or living in , besides, lets say, gnols , the sylvan guy, and the priest, kind of a few creatures inhabiting the town. the town should have a lover ground castle or somethin like that, more like a biodefensive building in wich most of u'r creature could live there. Btw...I have a pic on how u'r basilisk coul look, the fact is that is on the paper at the moment. But I'l scan it and put it here as soon as possible.
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TheNordicKing
Adventuring Hero
Dark Lord of the Smith
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posted February 06, 2006 04:52 PM |
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Race: 5
History: 3
Creatures: 5
Balance: 8
Originality: 3
overall 24/50.
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Check out my town. ICTC The Artic Town
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Oakwarrior
Famous Hero
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posted February 06, 2006 04:55 PM |
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Race: 6 (Above Average)
History: 4 (Below Average. You could do much better)
Creatures: 4 (Below Average)
Balance: 9 (Excellent! Well done in this part...)
Originality: 3 (Bad)
Total: 26
Average town.
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phoenixzs
Adventuring Hero
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posted February 06, 2006 07:42 PM |
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Race: 7(ý like swamp towns otherwise you would only get 6 )
History: 5( I like the animations but you should detail the events not just write it in one sentence)
Creatures:7(Could be more original)
Balance: 6 (that 7th levels ability is a bit strange)
Originality:5(last level is not dragon thats good )
total:30/50
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vinius
Hired Hero
Hero for a rent
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posted February 06, 2006 07:50 PM |
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re
What about a cup of flesh ?
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frakel
Adventuring Hero
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posted February 08, 2006 01:05 AM |
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Edited by frakel on 7 Feb 2006
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Race: 3 (Because description is very short)
History: 4
Creatures: 7
Balance: 6
Originality: 5
Overall: 25
Good luck!
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FriendOfGunnar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
able to speed up time
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posted February 09, 2006 10:22 PM |
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Swamp
Race( 1+5 )=6
History(1 +4 )=5
Creatures(1 +4 )=5
Balance( 2+4 )=6
Originality=3
Total Score= 25
Haha if we graded the Nival factions maybe they would get low “creativity” score too.
How I graded these:
Race (Originality [1-5]+Compatibility with HOMM5 universe[1-5])
History (How interesting is it to me [1-5] +Compatibility with HOMM5 universe [1-5])
Creatures (Originality [1-5] +Internal Consistency [1-5])
Balance (are the special skills inventive [1-5] + Does it have a variety of flyers, shooters, walkers, spell-casters [1-5]
Originality (all the originality scores added up and divided by two. This means that creativity counts twice. [1-10])
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kookastar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
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posted February 10, 2006 12:03 PM |
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Race 4– more description needed
History 2
Creatures 6
Balance 6
Originality 6
24/50
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BoogieMan
Famous Hero
The John of Spades
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posted February 11, 2006 11:44 PM |
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Race: 4
History: 6
Creatures: 6
Balance: 6
Originality: 3
TOTAL: 25
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The BoogieMan wrote ... and saw that it was good.
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Zsa
Famous Hero
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posted February 12, 2006 01:28 AM |
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History: 3
Race: 6
Creatures: 4
Balance: 5
Originality: 5
Total: 23
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