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Ted
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posted February 16, 2007 07:19 PM |
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ICTC the Benders
here is my very own version of a bender/elemental town
Hero- Guru
Aka- the benders
Associated colors- different from each bender
Worship- different benders worship their own God
Fire- Arkath
Water- Shalassa
Earth- Sylvanna
Air- Slyrath
Core philosophy- different for each kingdom
Country / kingdom- Kyoshi
Capital city- Omashu
Allies- no one
Neutral- everyone but
Enemys- Necropolis, Inferno, Academy
Key Symbols-
creatures-
Water Bender --> Ice Bender
Earth Bender --> Metal Bender
Bison --> Horned Bison
Air Bender --> Lightning Bender
Fire Bender --> Blue Flame Bender (need a name for it)
?????? --> ????????
Avatar
can go into the avatar state, for 2 turns the Avatar gains x10 his power
i will add more if it has good attention
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GenieLord
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posted February 16, 2007 07:30 PM |
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Quote: here is my very own version of a bender/elemental town
Hero- Guru
Aka- the benders
Associated colors- different from each bender
Worship- different benders worship their own God
Fire- Arkath
Water- Shalassa
Earth- Sylvanna
Air- Slyrath
Core philosophy- different for each kingdom
Country / kingdom- Kyoshi
Capital city- Omashu
Allies- no one
Neutral- everyone but
Enemys- Necropolis, Inferno, Academy
Key Symbols-
creatures-
Water Bender --> Ice Bender
Earth Bender --> Metal Bender
Bison --> Horned Bison
Air Bender --> Lightning Bender
Fire Bender --> Blue Flame Bender (need a name for it)
?????? --> ????????
Avatar
can go into the avatar state, for 2 turns the Avatar gains x10 his power
i will add more if it has good attention
1. Glad to see that you did a new town.
2. I like the concept of working with Benders, but the whole faction has to be more united. It seems like you have here 4 saperate factions.
3. Your creatures' names seem a little bit weird. They all have the same construction '_____ (Element's name) Bender'.
Just tell us the creatures' descriptions, and we'll find names for you.
Good luck.
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Ted
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posted February 16, 2007 07:34 PM |
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thanks GL, but i really dont know if i have the time craete a new faction, maybe some1 can continue my work
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Card_Ximinez
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posted February 16, 2007 08:14 PM |
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bixie
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posted February 16, 2007 09:20 PM |
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one of the heroes is named Aang, i take it.
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Ted
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posted February 16, 2007 09:53 PM |
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Quote: one of the heroes is named Aang, i take it.
dun dun dar, oops well the cats out the bag now bixie watchs avatar: the legend of aang, its a tv show, its very good, and GL was right, these factions are more separate than together, o well, i'm considering giveing this faction to someone who has the time for it, which i really dont have, GL when is the judjeing again?
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GenieLord
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posted February 16, 2007 11:56 PM |
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Quote:
Quote: one of the heroes is named Aang, i take it.
dun dun dar, oops well the cats out the bag now bixie watchs avatar: the legend of aang, its a tv show, its very good, and GL was right, these factions are more separate than together, o well, i'm considering giveing this faction to someone who has the time for it, which i really dont have, GL when is the judjeing again?
The final date for serving/editing factions is 1/3/07. You have 11 days left.
I would suggest to do it a bit differently:
All the Element's Banders, that were saperate, couldn't manage by themselves. They were attacked by passengers, and it was hard to survive for them, after all the races were organized in kingdoms and clans, and didn't have problems to attack the Elementals in their way.
Some of the Elemenatls decided to do a new guild, with Elementals from other Banders. They protected each other, lived together and worked together. They called their little guild Kyoshy.
Other one saw Kyoshy's success and joined them. Kyoshy became larger and larger untill it became a whole kingdom.
Kyoshy became the only place that Elementals' Banders live together like one race, even they are complete opposites.
If I make Elementals' faction, that would be the style. I will be glad if you'll execute it, and add it your touch.
You can just use this basic idea, if you like to.
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Daystar
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posted February 17, 2007 05:56 AM |
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what's a bender? Isn't that when you take two shots of vodka and lemons, serve cold with umbrella? I'm confused.
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Ted
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posted February 17, 2007 12:32 PM |
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11 days , forget it, i really havent got the time, maybe someone could give it a go and Daystar, its basically like this, their are elements all around us, the benders simply bring the <enter elemental type hear> into a focused <enter elemental type hear>, so they get all the loose energy flying around and focus it for an attack, get it?
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GenieLord
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posted February 17, 2007 12:52 PM |
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Quote: The creature line up should be something like this:
1: Wisp / Will o Wisp (light)
2: Shadow / Shade (Darkness)
3: Nereid / Undine (Water)
4: Sylph / Tempest (Air)
5: Salamander / Pyromancer (fire)
6: Groundling / Anteus(Earth)
7: Garuda / Phoenix (All)
I would change the names a little bit, but the actual idea is good here.
Mabey it would be town that worship Asha, and the creatures are the Elementlas of the Elemental Dragons.
Creatures might be: light creature, air, water, fire, earth, air, darkness, etc.
Ted, don't get desperate. Just go with the idea you like and finish it.
You have nothing to lose, here.
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bixie
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posted February 17, 2007 12:58 PM |
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Quote: The creature line up should be something like this:
1: Wisp / Will o Wisp (light)
2: Shadow / Shade (Darkness)
3: Nereid / Undine (Water)
4: Sylph / Tempest (Air)
5: Salamander / Pyromancer (fire)
6: Groundling / Anteus(Earth)
7: Garuda / Phoenix (All)
thats not too different from my conflux line-up here
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GenieLord
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posted March 02, 2007 12:46 PM |
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Ted, your town is a bit unfinished.
I checked out what do you have here:
Town name
Race name
Motto / philosophy
Colours
Worship
City and kingdom
Creatures names (worth 5 points)
What means that your maximum final mark can be 10%.
What do you want to do?
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Ted
Promising
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posted March 02, 2007 08:33 PM |
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Quote: What means that your maximum final mark can be 10%.
What do you want to do?
eh, i'm not using this faction, fell free not to look at it
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Gnoll_Mage
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posted March 12, 2007 08:49 PM |
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Because this faction was on the list, it gets marked...! Sorry...
Final mark: 6%, Terrible, 17th place
Favourite creature: Avatar
`Personal` mark: Very Bad / Bad, 15th place
Disclaimer: the final mark may change!
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