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Thread: ICTC 3: Sanctuary | This thread is pages long: 1 2 · «PREV |
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Tobius
Adventuring Hero
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posted March 31, 2008 09:21 PM |
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Edited by Tobius at 22:29, 31 Mar 2008.
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The Sanctuary
Cohesiveness(3+3)=6 Some of the creatures (Dark Elves) don't really fit for my liking. Besides I'm suspicious about dragon knights at all
Imagination(4+4+3)=11 You alter the old game mechanics - that's really nice, but I think in general the faction is not that original (dragons everywhere)
Back Story(3+2)=5 You try to tie with HoMM, but your "no good without evil" approach isn't that interesting to me
Battle Facets(4+3)=7 You've changed the creature system, but I think it's sadly the only really inventive idea here
Discretionary: +5 for stats, heroes, build-tree, and your alterations of the Heroes 5 game mechanics
Total Score=34
EDIT: You got an extra point for your new game mechanics (though you didn't expose them all)!
How I graded these:
Cohesiveness (Internal Coherence [1-5]+HoMM Compatibility [1-5])
Imagination (Creativity [1-5]+Innovations [1-5]+Originality[1-5])
Back Story (How well it expands on one of the HoMM universes [1-5]+How interesting it was to me [1-5])
Battle Facets (Variety [1-5]+Inventive Aspects [1-5])
Discretionary (Bonus for exceptional efforts[1-5])
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xerox
Promising
Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 31, 2008 10:18 PM |
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I didnt include all changes from my H6 idea, because this contest is not called "Create a Heroes 6 and Include all your H6 New Features".
The good without evil is just a hint to the end of the Heroes 6 campaign, because i will use this town for my Heroes 6 idea.
It will be the last town, in the Champions of Asha expansion.
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friendofgunnar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
able to speed up time
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posted April 12, 2008 07:10 AM |
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Sanctuary:
FriendofGunnar
cohesiveness 7/10
originality 10/15 "A new fresh Chromatic Drakeadon." awesome.
backstory 7/10
battle facets 8/10 grail creature is interesting. random breath attack would be fun
discretionary 4/5
sorry, just couldn't get into this faction. It needs to be pruned down to about one-third it's size to be interesting.
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Kookastar
Cohesiveness: 7 - a conglomeration like this doesn't seem to hold together well.
Imagination/creativity/originality/wow factor: 11 points
Back story: 8 points
Battle facets: 9 - your ideas about the game would be a great feature.
Discretionary: 3 points - did you draw the Dragvern yourself?
Total 38
TDL
Cohesiveness(max 10) : 7
Creativity (max 10): 8
Backstory (max 10): 10
Battle Facets (max 15): 11
additional (max 5): 4
the lore is nice, the story well-done, although the lineup is slightly too draconian
Total (max 50):40
Guest Judge's Score : 38.25 (Judges grades are weighed differently depending on how many factions they graded)
Judges Score: (36 + 38 + 40) / 3 = 38.00
Final Score: 38.13
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