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skeleton_king
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posted January 29, 2009 10:14 PM |
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ICTC 4 - The Night Elves
The Night Elves
1. General things:
Aka: The unluckies
Capital City: Ackaerleiy - the home of the feasts
Race: Elves
Faction Symbols: The Infinit Circle
Motto: Do what do you must do
Associated colors: Black
Worship: Urgash
Alightement: Good
Core Philosophy: Sad will be happy, and the happy will be sad. We must follow our destiny.
Country/Kingdom: The kingdom of happiness
Faction Aligntement: Good
Allies: Nobody
Neutral: Everybody
Enemies: Nobody
Primairy Magic Schools: Dark Magic
2. Story:
Ah, elves elves elves... Everybody knows what's an elf. A very happy guy, with large ears, who likes to look at stars.
They're very good and happy guys. They value the forests, and the earth.
But, the night elves are different. They're simple elves. They serve every god in the world of Ashan except Urgash. Always they have blesses on they from the gods. They were very very happy, in all of their life. No wars only feasts etc.. But the gods has seen the others races fight in wars. They die, and the night elves are making feasts. Oh..., what a life! But now, it's their turn to be sad, and the others to have peacae in mind and to be happy. Now, they serve Urgsh, but they're not bad guys, their good guys, but they only make what they must make.
That's their destiny.
3. Creatures:
Level 1:
Satyr
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad.
Unfortunateley Satyr
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Casts missfortune.
Level 2:
Elf
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Shooter.
Hell Elf
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Shooter.
Level 3:
Killer
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Killer.
Assassin
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Killer.
Level 4:
Hangman
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Lowers with 2 the morale of all battlefield troops.
Executioner
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Lowers with 2 the morale of all battlefield troops.
Level 5:
Priest
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Casts suffering or weakness.(activated avility)
Dark Priest
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Casts suffering, vulnerability or weakness.(activated avility)
Level 6:
Unicorn Rider
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Blind allies.
Unicorn Raider
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Blind allies.
Level 7:
Darkness Dragon
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Poison. Fire breath. Flyer.
Demonic Dragon
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Poison. Fire breath. Flyer.
4. Racial Skill&Abilities
Sorrow 
With this skill, the Night Elf has the ability to: good function as bad. Every damage point dealt by you will make your creature more powerfull: with more atack skill. 5 damage - + 1 attack skill.
Missfortune - decrase morale with 2. With morale decrased by 2, your creature will have +1 luck. With a dark spell, your creature will be healed with 5*hero/creature power+level of hero/creature*5.
NOTE: All of Night Elves' creatures can attack them between. It's like EMO.
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Lexxan
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Unimpressed by your logic
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posted January 29, 2009 10:16 PM |
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I'm a bit tired, and i'll not comment much, but there's something you have to explain to me before I return.
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Worship: Urgash
Alightement: Good
How? Urgash is the Dragon of Evil, yet your faction is good? 
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Adrius
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Stand and fight!
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posted January 29, 2009 10:19 PM |
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Edited by Adrius at 22:20, 29 Jan 2009.
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Quote:
NOTE: All of Night Elves' creatures can attack them between. It's like EMO.
LOL! It's like EMO 
A tip: How bout renaming "happy" and "sad" to Light and Darkness instead? Sounds a bit more serious you know.
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Country/Kingdom: The kingdom of happiness
Is this where Charlie the Unicorn lives? 
You should consider renaming this too imo.
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skeleton_king
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posted January 29, 2009 10:19 PM |
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Because they must be sad, then happy. Now eveil, then good.
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Adrius
Honorable
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Stand and fight!
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posted January 29, 2009 10:22 PM |
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I don't get it.
Ah well, you're like 11 years old after all. Respect added.
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skeleton_king
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posted January 30, 2009 10:09 AM |
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Quote:
Country/Kingdom: The kingdom of happiness
Is this where Charlie the Unicorn lives?
You should consider renaming this too imo.
No, but they've been always happy.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted February 01, 2009 11:41 PM |
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A Few comment, Skele
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Aka: The unluckies
it's "the Unfortunate" 
and every Factino in H5 has 2 Magic schools, so you have to fix that
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Unfortunateley Satyr
The name doesn't really work... what about Faun or Pan? 
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Elf
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Shooter.
Hell Elf
Abilities: Gains benefits from sad. Shooter.
We already have "Elves" in H5. You'll have to rename them => what about Night Elf => Doom Elf?
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Gains benefits from sadness.
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Priest => Dark Priest
Acolyte => Heretic?
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Unicorn Rider
Unicorns already exist in Sylvan. What about using Dark Unicorns? (They are called Phookas)
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With this skill, the Night Elf has the ability to: good function as bad. Every damage point dealt by you will make your creature more powerfull: with more atack skill. 5 damage - + 1 attack skill.
Missfortune - decrase morale with 2. With morale decrased by 2, your creature will have +1 luck. With a dark spell, your creature will be healed with 5*hero/creature power+level of hero/creature*5.
I don't really understand it You'll need to elaborate/explain a bit more.
Regardless, judging your age, I think your creative talent is really healthy, and a potential Faction Creation Master. Keep up the Good work
Only trying to help...
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Mytical
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Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted May 02, 2009 11:48 AM |
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Yes, some of the things here I was unable to understand. Still all Skele's factions are very interesting.
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Message received.
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friendofgunnar
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able to speed up time
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posted May 02, 2009 10:33 PM |
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jiriki9
-The Night Elves: nice idea, but extremely confusing and not that worked out, too. 18 points for the Emo-Elves.
Dark Crystal
The Night Elves
Cohesiveness 4/10 – not very cohesive. Faction has more human than elven creatures. Unicorns don’t seem to fit this faction.
Storyline/History 0/10 – no history, nor campaign.
Creativity 12/15 – Although the idea of ‘Night Elves’ is not invented here, but it seems original and creative.
Battle facets 2/10 – the racial skill is not very understandable. No feedback on creatures.
Discretionary 2/5 – faction is unfinished and much info is missing.
Total Score: 20/50
Mytical
NightElves - 36/50
Jiriki: 18 (25%) + DarkCrystal: 20 (25%) + Mytical: 36 (50%)
Final score= 27.5
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