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Carcity
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posted March 31, 2009 07:54 AM |
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Edited by Carcity at 22:41, 01 Apr 2009.
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Once upon a time...
there was a forum. On that forum was a member with a little wierd mind. That member decided to make a thread in the forum. in that thread he wrote this. He thn wanted to make a competition about it.
Ok, for those of you that don't know what I'm doing, this is a competition. You will write a story. then you will post it. I (and anyone else who wants to) will judge your work and give you a score from 1-3. then the next round starts.
Rules:
The story MUST begin with the frase: Once upon a time.
It shouldn't be to long and not to short. about the size of an A4 paper should be enough.
In every round there is a theme or an extra rule that will be added that will affect the story. For an Example:
The story has to be about a lizard, it has to have a gun in it ETC.
First round starts!
Special rule for round one: The ending have to be a sad ending.
Contestants:
Mytical, 3 points.
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Why can't you save anybody?
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Mytical
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted March 31, 2009 08:20 AM |
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Once apon a time there was a grand community. It was watched over by a grand wizard who could change reality with a single thought. However, the wizard knew that he would not always be around when trouble brewed. So he picked from the community some Wardens to help protect the community if he was away. For a time, it was good.
Now though he could change reality to suit him, the wizard could not forsee the future. Neither could he see everything, though he could see much. While he was away, trouble brewed. The citizens started accusing the Wardens of abusing their power, because of a few bad Wardens that had been banished a long time ago.
Taking advantage of the strife, a few trolls disguised themselves as citizens and started sewing mischief amoung them. Even some of the most nobel and well meaning citizens were fooled, and started to believe that the Wardens were evil.
A civil war broke out. Brother against brother, sister against sister and the once grand community started to tear itself apart. Soon the mighty wizard returned and was about to set things right. Then a giant meteor fell and before the wizard could react killed everybody. The end.
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Message received.
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Carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted March 31, 2009 05:30 PM |
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Nice one Mytical, you got the idea. 
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Carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted April 01, 2009 10:41 PM |
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Edited by Carcity at 22:42, 01 Apr 2009.
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woah, first round over (with a few extra days added to) and only one reply? anyway, score:
Mytical. I thought of your story was good with a funny ending. 3P (where three is max and 0 lowest)
Round 2:
The story must have a broken teddybear in it.
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Why can't you save anybody?
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RedSoxFan3
Admirable
Legendary Hero
Fan of Red Sox
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posted April 05, 2009 08:35 PM |
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Once upon a time, the end.
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Go Red Sox!
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baklava
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Mostly harmless
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posted April 06, 2009 02:22 AM |
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Quote:
Once upon a time, the end.
What do you mean, "the end"?
They didn't live happily ever after?
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"Let me tell you what the blues
is. When you ain't got no
money,
you got the blues."
Howlin Wolf
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FrenzyThanatos
Bad-mannered
Tavern Dweller
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posted April 06, 2009 07:53 AM |
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Once upon a time hc was boring then i deceidet to register but the evil mods banned me cause they had to much freetime.After that i come back and get total frenzy and everyone is happy.
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TheDeath
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
with serious business
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posted April 06, 2009 08:52 PM |
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Once upon a time, there was an awesome bear called Teddy, which challenged ceiling cat, and failed. People remember it as "The Legend of Teddybear". That's it.
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The above post is subject to SIRIOUSness.
No jokes were harmed during the making of this signature.
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lucky_dwarf
Promising
Supreme Hero
Visiting
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posted April 07, 2009 03:44 PM |
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Once upon a time there was a magical place. It was full of unicorns and rainbows and unicorns and rainbows. And there were pretty flowers everywhere! All living things lived in harmony and piece. But then an evil little goblin opened up a dark portal opened up and out of it came... Dalorn a huge menacing dragon. No Knight in the land could stop him and the unicorns all were driven on the brink of extinction. The dragon laughed a gurgling laugh as he stepped on all the pretty flowers and burned up all the rainbows. Then came Illidan. The enemy of our enemy. We pledged ourselves freely upon him and fought as we had never fought before. Even then i think a part of me knew that the dwarf realm would never be the same again. I walk among these stone halls as our kin traded goods and services with that of demons. I remember the caves as they used to be. My soul bears the burden of my misjudgment but i have been patient. I have been waiting. And when the time is right the betrayer will become the betrayed.
and for those who will ask... i totally ripped of world of warcraft
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted April 07, 2009 03:55 PM |
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Once upon a time there were two teddybears in a nice house and family. They were in love and couldn't live without one another. However, one day the family decided to give one of the teddybears to an orphanage. Obviously the other teddybear was broke after this event, and became extremely angry on the whole family he was in. The next day the entire family simply disappeared without a trace and when the police entered the house for investigation they only found a small teddybear lying on the floor with some 'scars' like it fought with someone recently. Nobody knows for sure what happened.
lol I know I twisted what you wanted to be about 
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Carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted April 07, 2009 06:13 PM |
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come on guys. No off-tpoics. the only one who posted on-topic was Ash. I'll give the results of round 2 in 2 days. HOPEFULLY more people will have made their entry.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted April 07, 2009 06:20 PM |
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Edited by Lexxan at 21:51, 07 Apr 2009.
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Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
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Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
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Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
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Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
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Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
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Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
Once upon there was a Troll. He was silenced. Then He made another Account. The End? I THINK NOT!!!
And then Vokial came and stars rained down from Heaven. It was Starmaggeddon and all perished. In addition, City's Teddybear was broken.
The End.
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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lucky_dwarf
Promising
Supreme Hero
Visiting
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posted April 07, 2009 06:31 PM |
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come on guys. No off-tpoics. the only one who posted on-topic was Ash. I'll give the results of round 2 in 2 days. HOPEFULLY more people will have made their entry.
are you sure mine was off topic 
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Carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted April 07, 2009 06:44 PM |
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yes. if you read the masterpost and the post with the results from round 1, then you should have known that a broken teddy bear should have been in the story.
@Lexxan, No spamming. Otherwise I'll call MM AND VokialBG over.
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lucky_dwarf
Promising
Supreme Hero
Visiting
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posted April 07, 2009 09:47 PM |
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never seen where you wrote it
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Carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted April 07, 2009 09:49 PM |
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@ LuckyQuote:
woah, first round over (with a few extra days added to) and only one reply? anyway, score:
Mytical. I thought of your story was good with a funny ending. 3P (where three is max and 0 lowest)
Round 2:
The story must have a broken teddybear in it.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted April 07, 2009 09:52 PM |
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Better like this?
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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lucky_dwarf
Promising
Supreme Hero
Visiting
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posted April 07, 2009 09:54 PM |
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Quote:
@ LuckyQuote:
woah, first round over (with a few extra days added to) and only one reply? anyway, score:
Mytical. I thought of your story was good with a funny ending. 3P (where three is max and 0 lowest)
Round 2:
The story must have a broken teddybear in it.
damn i only read the first post
i must be going blind
sorry bout that 
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So much has changed in my absence.
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted April 08, 2009 08:34 PM |
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Better like this?
No. Really Lex your post is kinda spammy and a little annoying to scroll, and this is not even the VW.
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