Jiriki9
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posted October 01, 2012 10:34 AM |
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Another factiosn gathering! =)
Welcome aboard.
So far, it's hard to comment since you gave not much infos but the creature names. Will try, though.
Not sure about ahving FOUR elites...
A general issue: names! You seem to be in your native language. I think for this forum, better switch to english, also concerning names. Otherwise, the creatures seem strange, weird and alien to readers.
Also, there are quite some typos here, aren't they? That's no true concern!!!but you should correct them to make all of this look better.
Academy
overall the faction seems reasonable. the Elements in ehre is interesting, not sure about it, but can be nice, maybe. The fifth elemental...well I'm not fan of other elements than the classical, but VOID could be nice - the immaterial counterpart to the material elements...
naga as core is to weak, imo.
Only nonsenic symbols for the sentinel? O.o
Inferno
Demons again. XD Soem nice ideas i think Also some downers, yet, but a good start.
Your cores are ok. What's a Spown, though?^^
I think if they are done well, I may fall in love with your Elite gathering.
The high-tierd units...well...soem venom beast higher than DEVIL??? No-Go, imo!
Concern: No Cerberus anywhere? 
Ñouloir
What the hell is that? Never heard nor understand the name^^ I'd advice changing it to a better udnerstandable one. (In English, maybe?  )
What's a "Varvar"?^^
Elite seems quite nice again and so does the high tiers Reasonable Lineup overall.
Asylum
What's a Gorgulie?^^
Overall, I'd say this is ok. Not outstanding, though! I'll wat for more details.
Fort
Another Nordic Faction^^ They get boring over time, you people know?^^ But it's fine with me, still. Some nice are in. But will not go on until more details are there.
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