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LightAvatarX
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posted January 24, 2015 03:50 PM |
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ICTC 8 - Ancient Shantiri
 Ancient Shantiri
In the ancient age before the elder wars there was only one faction,the shantiri.Shantiri Empire unites all six Elder races into a single nation overseed by the Dragon Gods. The Shantiris spread across the face of the world, building titanic cities and temples. But the conflict between Angels and Faceless teared apart the empire and each of the elder races founded their own kingdoms. Soon after the Primordial Twins of Urgash and Asha became myth and legend.
The shantiri empire had for residents humans,elfs,dwarfs,nagas,angels and faceless.But shatiri's army consists from dragon-godness creatures who we have never met before.This powerfull creatures was destroyed trying to save the shantiri empire from the elder wars.
Capitol:Athlen
District:Thallan
Townscreen's song:Shantiri Eternal
Line-up
Tier I:
Paralysie evil/Hidden chaos
Description:Urgash the dragon-godness of Chaos,was preparing his invasion to the shantiri empire in the ancient ages.He needed information about what¢s happening in the empire.He tried to send some of his demonical creatures to take information but their appearance betrayed them and they found a painfull death.Then,of the previous results Urgash decided to make a kind of demon that would have taken the hearts of the shantiri¢s inhabitants and they would give him information.This creature,paralysie evil is a half demon,half spirit unit in male gender.He is very cute,have the appereance of a spiritual wolf and obey in every owner¢s command.When these creatures were sent to the shantiri they were returning to sheogh without any information.Urgash tried to train them but they didn¢t want to fight.Urgash exiled them into the ashan.When the shantiri¢s explorers found this creatures they fell in love with them and they took them back to the shantiri empire.The shantiri¢s inhabitants loved these creatures too and the shantiri¢s governors decided to use these creatures as units for their army.Sometimes they used to be as pets.The greatest of all,wizard and later the seventh dragon Sar-Elam loved these cute creatures and he converted some of them who were more loyal to hidden chaos.Hiden chaos is the ultimate cute creature but and the most danger. Only Sar-Elam understood the reason that they weren¢t obey to Urgash,because he hadn¢t loved them but he used them as a weapon contrariwise of the shantiri ihabitants who really loved them.
Status:Hidden chaos is very cute and friendly with the enemies,but when they are near enough hidden chaos open his mouth and bite him or he crab him with his nails.It¢s a melee attack unit and very fast.He has immunity to mind control,paralyse and other spells like this.When this unit is near with another one of shantiti¢s army he¢s attacking to defend it.Also it is able to paralyse some of the enemies.
Tier II:
Wave virgo/Yuki lova
Description:At the times Shalassa was building her faction she had to creat her childs.Inspired from the unlimmited water and her source of freedom she created the wave virgos.The wave vigro is mainly made from water and air.They are very confident,extremely beauty and mighty,but there is one more thing about them and this is that they have a keen craving about the male gender.While Shalassa wanted her child be loyal,devout and emouleted,the wave virgos was very naughty about the "enjoyment" issue.Shlassa finally exciled them and then she created the kenshis instead of them.Wave vvirgos without home anymore decided to move in shantiri's army.The shantiri inhabitants didn't judge them like Shalassa and some of them had same tastes...Some of the wave virgos who found love with Shalassa's creatures transformed in Yuki lovas.Yuki lovas are the most powerfull sanctuary creatures and have an unlimmited beauty.
Status:Yuki lovas is a shooting unit.They attack shooting a part of their body to the enemy unit.In the end of the turn their body is resurrected.They have the mind controll spell,taking the enemies to their side with their beauty.Also the creature protects every friendly unit from water spells.
Tier III:
Star prayer/Moon slave
Description:Asha is the dragon-godness of order and she judges everyone in his human life but and in his post mortem life.When a creature dies his fate depends on Asha's choise.The most evil and malice creatures who have spotted the world of Ashan with thousnads of sins have a special surprise of Asha's side.Asha converts them to star prayers a half-spirit,half-human creature in a female gender.Their new goal of their life is to pay their sins to the world.They haven't free will,they have only the goals which Asha gives them.They usually find their self in ancient shantiri's empire army as a good way to pay their sins.The shantiri's inhabitants don't afraid this creatures but curiously they sympathise them.When the star prayers have pay the most of their sins they automatically are coverted to moon slaves.At this period of their life they must pay their most faulty sins.When the moon slaves have fineshed their goal of their life their soul return to Asha.This Asha's perfect idea help the six elder races to be curbed and not fall in Uragash's sins.
Status:This unit attacks singing a melody which describes it's sins.
This melody is and healing and catastrophic.Also this unit has so much internal force that with a touch can ravage a dead creture.
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Mediczero
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posted January 26, 2015 09:35 PM |
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Go for it, but you should know, I have changed a bit in my forge idea, so you will have a hard time!
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Articun
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posted January 26, 2015 09:39 PM |
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I'm here too, so beware guys!! Also, nice pic for a townscreen 
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 27, 2015 07:12 PM |
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Medic,come on forge better than shantiri 
Only the time will show...
Articun,thanks 
May the best win
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Jiriki9
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posted January 27, 2015 10:07 PM |
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Quote:
Only the time will show...
Time and the judges
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Articun
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posted January 28, 2015 10:58 PM |
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Don't like that much the names Star Prayer and Moon Slave.. It doesn't fit so much with the lore or with Asha...
Maybe try Moon Child / Moon Chosen?
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 28, 2015 10:59 PM |
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Of course,the judges!
Shantiri eternal!
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 28, 2015 11:02 PM |
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Articun,I totally dissagree!Personally I just love the names and I believe that they fit so much with the lore and Asha!
And for this reason I choosed this names
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Articun
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posted January 28, 2015 11:06 PM |
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As you wish
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Mediczero
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posted January 29, 2015 07:24 AM |
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Nice one light, can't wait to see waht else you are going to pull out!
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Jiriki9
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posted January 29, 2015 11:41 AM |
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What intrigues me is: are you planning to do a lore that shows the return of the Shantiri (so that they'd beactually afaction next to the others) or are you simply trying to show how a shantiri faction would look like. As so often, I'd like bothh
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 29, 2015 09:31 PM |
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@Medi,my favourite naga thank you and you will see...
@My dear judger,I'm trying show to everyone how the ancient shantiri empire was!Personally I had many questions about ancient shantiri and we have very few information.For this reason I choosed this faction and I guarantee to you that in the end you won't have no one query
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Articun
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posted January 30, 2015 12:18 AM |
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Very creative, keep going!!!
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 30, 2015 12:42 AM |
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Thank you articun!You know that we the greeks have a huge inspiration!
Your faction is cool as well
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Mediczero
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posted January 30, 2015 12:50 PM |
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Nice job light, can't wait see the rest of the lineup!
But I would advise you to try rewrite the creature description, just to see if you can do them better...
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 30, 2015 01:31 PM |
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Medic,don't you like the hidden chaos's story?
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Mediczero
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posted January 30, 2015 01:38 PM |
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LightAvatarX said:
Medic,don't you like the hidden chaos's story?
Thrust me, I do, but to be honest your writing needs a bit of inprovement. Try rewriting, I believe that you would find the end result much better than what you have now...
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 30, 2015 01:54 PM |
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And I think that you are affecting the judgers's decision in this way!
If you want to give me an "advise" give it in shadow council or in hc messanger and no down of my project!
Thank you!
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Mediczero
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posted January 30, 2015 01:56 PM |
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Sorry, just wanted to help...
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LightAvatarX
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posted January 30, 2015 02:03 PM |
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And I will help you...but I don't write that down of your project
Anyway I appreciate your interest!
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