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celfious
Promising
Legendary Hero
From earth
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posted June 12, 2004 03:07 AM |
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haiku
5
7
5
the japaneze sylable poem style.
Try it or diet.
we die anyways
Should we care about our fates?
aslong as we die
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What are you up to
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BoogieMan
Famous Hero
The John of Spades
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posted June 12, 2004 03:26 PM |
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silenced skybells melt,
for the maiden has married
the snake, in her dream
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no more purpose now
to my being. my sword rests
inside the dead beast
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will you ease my end,
cry your tears on my pyre,
kiss my lips of ash?
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my claw nears your throat.
let your warm blood absolve me
of my every other sin
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drop your robe, reveal
your pure stone body. let me
be your sole carver
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your thirsty lips search
for the last drop of my soul.
such sweet damnation ...
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there's none to save me
noone to give me something
to turn my back on
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I sing my curses,
praise my pain, welcome my fate,
dwell on my demise
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I have been falling
for so long that I will soon
start growing new wings
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my left shoulder hurts
from your thoughts' weight. stop building
temples in your mind
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The BoogieMan wrote ... and saw that it was good.
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Celfious
Promising
Legendary Hero
From earth
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posted June 12, 2004 03:51 PM |
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I took the image
I stole the ones only key
I have everything
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What are you up to
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Asmodean
Responsible
Supreme Hero
Heroine at the weekend.
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posted June 12, 2004 06:09 PM |
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Hey Celfious dude
Cool thread about haikus man.
Really good idea.
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To err is human, to arr is pirate.
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ratmonky
Famous Hero
Abu Hur Ibn Rashka
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posted June 12, 2004 09:33 PM |
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I liked your haikus,
but they are meant to describe
(e)motions through nature.
(arghh, didn't work, oh well)
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Dies illa, dies irae,
Calamitatis et miseriae.
Requiem aeternum
Dona eis, dona eis Domine.
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Wiseman
Known Hero
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posted June 12, 2004 09:34 PM |
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"I shall express my feelings through a disciplined form of Japanese Haiku poetry:
My heart aches
Because of you, I want to vomit
Die away from me "
Hyde, from that stupid show about seventies.
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Truth may be out there, but lies are inside your head.
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BoogieMan
Famous Hero
The John of Spades
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posted June 13, 2004 11:28 AM |
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Quote:
I liked your haikus,
but they are meant to describe
(e)motions through nature.
Yes, that's what they express traditionally, but that doesn't mean we have to be restricted to it, does it? Any poem of the 5-7-5 syl. structure is a haiku (or at least a poor attempt in our cases  )
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The BoogieMan wrote ... and saw that it was good.
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kookastar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
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posted July 21, 2006 10:01 AM |
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Slices of fried spam
Emit the scent of laughter
Volcanic Wastelands
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2XtremeToTake
Promising
Supreme Hero
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posted July 21, 2006 10:07 AM |
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Boogiesman story was perfect until this line
my claw nears your throat.
let your warm blood absolve me
of my every other sin
Of-my-Ev-ry-ot-her-sin
its supposed to be 5, not 7
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I almost had a psychic girlfriend but she left me before we met.
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