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TitaniumAlloy
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posted June 09, 2006 11:49 AM |
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Shadows- PRPG OOC
This is my private roleplay story.
It is based on the defining moments in the life of a man named Jon, who lives in a communist warring country, in which he is a thief.
Some of this story will be handed in as my creative writing coursework at school, so is pretty important, and any feedback would be grand I'm aiming to make it a little different, and original, and not what you expect, and I already have a bunch of it written.
I might go on to continue the story further, but I definately consider this to be the best piece I have ever written so far, and thanks to everyone who reads it. Posting it scene by scene will hopefully help to break it up and make it a bit easier for the reader.
Maybe later on, if someones interested, a second RPer could be introduced, who knows. But here it is for the time being. Thanks again
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John says to live above hell.
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Lord_Pc
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posted June 09, 2006 12:54 PM |
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hey TA, i need a story for an english assignment which is due tuesday. your story seems like it will do my assignment well from what i have read so far. do you mind if i copy it???
i dont beleive i will be reading much of it so GL
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Two goldfish were in their tank. One turns to the other and says, 'You man the guns, I'll drive.'
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posted June 13, 2006 10:35 AM |
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Well the word limit is 1000, and so far ive got around 2100 and it's still not as close to perfect as I think I can get...
I'm thinking about cutting it down to just one scene of the one event I have right now, but I can't decide which one, maybe someone could help with that
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John says to live above hell.
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posted June 13, 2006 03:48 PM |
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Taking a look at the Coliseum thing I'm starting to reconsider posting it here as opposed to there, but I'm not sure about the rules and stuff there so I think I'll just leave it as a PRP, then it'll be easier to add on more later.
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John says to live above hell.
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posted November 21, 2007 10:18 AM |
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I'm interested in posting more on this story, though I'm not really sure where to go.
If someone else is interested in joining in and adding their portion of the story that'd be cool.
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posted November 21, 2007 10:23 AM |
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WOW I'm excited to read it, have you posted this somewhere already? {2006}.
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posted November 21, 2007 10:40 AM |
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