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bjorn190
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Supreme Hero
Jebus maker
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posted September 02, 2002 11:03 PM |
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Losing hope..
Is it possible to lose hope?
To live on autopilot, without wanting.
I remember when I used to care.
And when things made me smile,
for longer than a minute
How can something so beautiful
mess you up so much inside?
Was it meant to be?
to finally understand,
and then break
The images remain, the scent of you
the stars in the sky
somehow lost the glow
compared to your eyes
alone
Could you ever know?
So many years now
that all this time
I´ve thought of you
And seeing you there
so happy with him
everything I wanted to be
I found in you
made me smile
When he left
I saw you cry
you asked me
if I´d felt it too
I never thought you´d know
how a heart breaks
Every night
It´s getting closer now
I wonder how
I changed to this
I try.. but it´s the same
always
To go beyond life
in your eyes
your hair, your hips
I felt your scent on the bus the other day
too late
I don´t even miss you
No hope tonight
I live to feel
my broken heart
for just one second more.
I´ll cry for you
If there´s one thing I could say
to make you understand
I know what to say
You made me love
and I love you
as long as love exists
with all my heart
and all my tears
and all my life
and all my years
I´ll live my life
and all my years
for just one thing
to be there
if you need me
and cry
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Sir_Stiven
Honorable
Legendary Hero
banned
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posted September 02, 2002 11:08 PM |
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wow man thats good, it really is.
The way you write that is, not whats it about i guess...
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Aculias
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Undefeatable Hero
Pretty Boy Angel Sacraficer
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posted September 03, 2002 12:16 AM |
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Bjorn I am forever yours faithfully
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Dreaming of a Better World
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Aculias
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Undefeatable Hero
Pretty Boy Angel Sacraficer
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posted September 03, 2002 12:24 AM |
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WHat is hope I wonder myself.
Can it be somethang you wanted so much.
Only for it all to come all down all at once woth a failing feeling.
Can we ever have hope again.
It may be such a frightening thang.
You wanted this love so bad.
Even in your heart you knew it could not be.
I am sitting here thinking about how much I wanted your love.
Now you are happy while I sit here depressed.
Hope is somethang you want to come true & is up to fate or desteny.
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Dreaming of a Better World
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2XtremeToTake
Promising
Supreme Hero
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posted September 03, 2002 12:25 AM |
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im not a big poetry fan at all- but i have an assignment at school to write a poem.....ugh, need help LOL
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privatehudson
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Legendary Hero
The Ultimate Badass
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posted September 03, 2002 01:47 AM |
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That's actually quite moving and thought provoking well done Bjorn
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We're on an express elevator to Hell, goin' down!
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arachnid
Promising
Famous Hero
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posted September 03, 2002 01:55 AM |
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Quote: That's actually quite moving and thought provoking well done Bjorn
Now cant you tell he never had a woman in his life, hudson?
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privatehudson
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Legendary Hero
The Ultimate Badass
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posted September 03, 2002 01:58 AM |
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I was being polite and not discussing it!
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Aculias
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Pretty Boy Angel Sacraficer
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posted September 03, 2002 02:02 AM |
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But I rather have Arachnid as my Girlfriend
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Dreaming of a Better World
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bjorn190
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Supreme Hero
Jebus maker
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posted September 03, 2002 06:19 PM |
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Actually I have =)
Lived with one for about a year too. it was cool.
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andiangelo
Hired Hero
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posted September 03, 2002 06:55 PM |
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Quote: Actually I have =)
Lived with one for about a year too. it was cool.
thanks for sharing i dont care !!!
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hamsi128
Promising
Supreme Hero
tosser tavern owner
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posted September 03, 2002 06:58 PM |
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Quote:
thanks for sharing i dont care !!!
then get out of here !!!
i care about bjorns life he is my friend !!!
andiangelo you are the worst tosser around with i ruels , shame on you
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