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fred79
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posted July 31, 2013 09:00 PM |
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i can dig it, markkur. 
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted August 01, 2013 12:33 AM |
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It seems to me that I can't get you out of my head
No matter how hard I try to forget you, you'll still be there
Even though I know you don't feel the same
I wouldn't stop thinking of you for niether money nor fame
Well, this is kind of sweet; it is, I guess
The question is a hard one - will I be able to confess
It isn't as depressing as the other one, is it?
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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fred79
Disgraceful
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posted August 01, 2013 12:40 AM |
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no, noobx. much better. keep it coming.
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fred79
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posted August 01, 2013 12:42 AM |
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seraphim said:
My Little HC, My Little HC
snow, snow, snow, FAFAAsnow...
I used to wonder what stupidity could be
Until you all shared its magic with me
Big annoyance
Tons of grief
A beautiful thread
Faithful believers strong trolls
Admins sharing kindness!
It's a very hard feat
And trolling makes it all complete
You have my dead brainb cells
Do you know you're all snowing idiots?
My Little HC
My Little HC
My Little HC...snowing hell i hate this place.
lol, how in the hell did i end up overlooking this?
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted August 01, 2013 12:52 AM |
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Thanks, fred 
Also, screw Mozzart, Seraphim is the new virtuoso 
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Ghost said:
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted August 04, 2013 10:42 PM |
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Roses are red
Violets are red
Everything I see is red
BLOOD IS EVERYWHERE
I just had to release some anger.
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Ghost said:
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artu
Promising
Undefeatable Hero
My BS sensor is tingling again
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posted August 07, 2013 06:09 AM |
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An induction of radio songs
of how everything goes
like words from another land
as if they too land
to things never called Them
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fred79
Disgraceful
Undefeatable Hero
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posted May 09, 2014 06:14 PM |
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Edited by fred79 at 06:45, 10 May 2014.
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space reserved.
heh, everytime i want to post some more of my writings, i always decide against it. i'll let this thread go back to being mired in the past.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted September 28, 2014 11:20 PM |
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This one goes to a very special girl in my life. If things could've only gone better...
Stop this madness
Every night it's the same
You and I, who's to blame
I can't stand it any longer
My love for you is getting stronger
And all the times we were next to eachother
I would relive them one way or another
Did you move on to another land?
Oh how I'd love to hold your hand
Separated, yet I still remember
I feel hollow now that you're gone
My heart is like December
Without you I'm all alone
I need to see you
Hear your voice
Feel your touch
Taste your lips
Why can't I understand?
There is no future for me in the past
Dead memories are all that's left
Sweet nostalgia, and a sad soul
My cold shell, they call it home
You're my secret
My key to a higher plane
But life stole it from me
And I can't get it back
A sad story
A bitter end
I need a second chance
I need to try again
Sorry for necroing.
I miss her... I miss her a lot. 
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Ghost said:
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fred79
Disgraceful
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posted September 28, 2014 11:39 PM |
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you'll get over her, noobx. and you'll find an even better girl. you have your whole life ahead of you. 
nice poem, btw.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted September 29, 2014 07:01 AM |
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fred79 said:
you'll get over her, noobx. and you'll find an even better girl. you have your whole life ahead of you.
Thanks, but I don't think there is a better girl out there. I've know her for a good chunk of time. 4 years of school isn't just anything - I've spent a quarter of my life with her (not in a reletionship, though :/ ). It's funny that I only figured out how much I miss her, how much I need her now that we've taken separate roads. Even my rational mind can't explain this.
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nice poem, btw.
Raw emotion does wonders for writing
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DagothGares
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
No gods or kings
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posted September 29, 2014 10:38 AM |
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Quote:
Raw emotion does wonders for writing
I think it's better to maintain some sort of distance from the emotions as they blind you to good writing, imho.
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If you have any more questions, go to Dagoth Cares.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted September 29, 2014 11:53 AM |
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I wasn't going for a good poem. This was just a way to release what I had inside me.
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Ghost said:
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted October 02, 2014 12:10 AM |
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Edited by NoobX at 13:16, 04 Jan 2015.
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I am traped inside your cage
There's no light to shine upon me
Desperate, I pray for you
To let me out
To free this poor soul
A soul tortured and warped
By the cruelty of this world
Like a wave crashing into a cliff
I hit the wall between ourselves
The pain, I still feel it
The only remedy is your touch
I see no hope
My mind has gone blank
All but one thing is gone
You still reside
In a ruined world
Left to the mercy of your heart
There is no change, but nothing's the same
Please, take me into your hands
Hold me for the rest of the time
Let me know the true love
Or break me and end this game
I try to justify everything that's happened
Yet I fail every time
For reason is already gone
I should have never crossed this line
Oh, will you look
At these tattered remains
Of a man who loved you
Or will you forever keep me locked
Unable to escape
This charm you put on me
Will it be my bane
The darkness draws closer
I am still inside your cage
Why can't I find any peace?
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Ghost said:
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Galatea
Supreme Hero
Well, I'm Ceres!
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posted October 02, 2014 02:33 AM |
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Nice poems, Noobs! You didn't tell me you have a talent like this. Keep it up!
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And she told you, laughing down to her core, so she would not cry, as she lay on your lap,
"Nobody here can live forever, quiet in the grasp of dusk and summer."
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted October 02, 2014 07:17 AM |
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Thanks, although I don't think it's a talent.
I just can't fall asleep and I have to free myself of the emotions inside.
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Tsar-Ivor
Promising
Legendary Hero
Scourge of God
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posted October 02, 2014 03:25 PM |
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Ah, I now see where Mvass was going wrong, he was far too literal and just wrote a rhyming story essentially, left very little to interpretation and to the imagination.
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"No laughs were had. There is only shame and sadness." Jenny
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted October 06, 2014 10:38 AM |
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Broken, laying here like dead
Need some kind of a medicine
To fix this in my head
I feel cold, but I'm burning inside
Something is amiss, don't know what
Facing my fears
The end - it nears
Looking for answers
All these sudden glances
And most of the time
Nothing seems real
I'm a pawn in this game
What happens to me doesn't matter
It never ends
Sometimes I wish it did
But then I remember
A voice so tender
Lost in my thoughts
I still wonder
Two pearls
Their meaning I ponder
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fuChris
Promising
Supreme Hero
Master to the Speed of Light
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posted October 06, 2014 11:27 AM |
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I would like to bring attention to THIS book called Poems That Make Grown Men Cry.
I find many of them really moving. This is the first poem in it :
Elegy
CHIDIOCK TICHBORNE (1563–86)
(Tichborne died at around age twenty-three in 1586, a conspirator in the infamous Babington Plot to assassinate Elizabeth I and rescue Mary Stuart from captivity. The poem was written as part of a letter to his wife, Agnes, days before the hideous sentence for traitors was carried out, and he was executed. It’s a beautifully constructed elegy, as would be expected from an educated gentleman of the period. The use of paradox to describe his mental state reaches out beyond the personal and touches upon the universal human condition.)
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Elegy
My prime of youth is but a frost of cares,
My feast of joy is but a dish of pain,
My crop of corn is but a field of tares,
And all my good is but vain hope of gain;
The day is past, and yet I saw no sun,
And now I live, and now my life is done.
My tale was heard and yet it was not told,
My fruit is fallen, and yet my leaves are green,
My youth is spent and yet I am not old,
I saw the world and yet I was not seen;
My thread is cut and yet it is not spun,
And now I live, and now my life is done.
I sought my death and found it in my womb,
I looked for life and saw it was a shade,
I trod the earth and knew it was my tomb,
And now I die, and now I was but made;
My glass is full, and now my glass is run,
And now I live, and now my life is done.
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"Now I am become Chris, the destroyer of worlds." - Robert Oppenheimer.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted October 06, 2014 12:12 PM |
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Standing still
On thin air
How did I get here?
Looks like a dream
But where are you?
Tell me what to do
Oh, tell me what to do
A cold wind blows in my face
Mockingly
Wherever I turn
It doesn't stop
Confusion strikes in
I feel there's something more to it than just a simple phase
And in this situation - how can I win?
A feeling of unease is taking over
A shiver goes down my spine
How do I get down
How do you feel now?
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