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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 25, 2014 03:10 PM |
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Saving Lord Valeriy
Introduction: It seems that the Ruler and Builder of the infamous town, Heroictown and also the leader of the great organization, Heroes Community was kidanapped by someone that calls himself Duke Falcon, otherwise known as mentat, so a member of the organization called Herry sets out to save him
"WWHAT?!!", the shocked Herry says.
"Look, i'm telling you, we need to find a solution, so calm down." clarifies fred.
"You know that our lifes will get ruined if he gets killed, right?" asks Herry before clapping his hand on the table, cutting it in half, "If what i said comes true, every signle disgraceful ****er will just get revenge and we would drown in trouble."
"Hey don't worry, all we have to do is save the day again."fred says with confidence.
"Yeah again but with a totally other level of dangerousness..."
The two people goes to alert the others of what happened...
....later, the last member to be informed
"So you want me to risk my life, fight these *****es and save Lord Valeriy? sure, that sounds fun..."Kipshasz agreed to their idea with a wide grin, somewhat a bit evil... but it was good since none agreed to join in the mission
"Well let's get to the first point, how are we gonna reach the idiots?"
"Well of course we can ask the mods but..."Herry suddenly makes a serious face"We have to do this without alerting them, if we do, it would cause compelte chaos..."Fred, Ohfor and kipshasz nod understandingly.
"But then, what other choice do we have?"
"I haven't confirmed this yet but i think Members with the rank of Disgraceful live in the home of bandits and robbers, The Blackhole, we have no option but to go to that city, With Stealth."
"OR, we could disguise as bandits."Proposes Fred, "Good idea, Kipshasz, you are gonna do it solo, you are the best one out of us that would act like them, but be careful."Says Herry.
"This is gonna be more amusing than i thought... hehehehe..."Answers the said spy.
>>so how'd you like the introduction? this idea has been in my mind for quite a bit of time, i wanted to do it as a map but i've never made one and i believe that even if i did it would be horrible. i used kipshsz cause he would be the type which would love to crush skulls... fred as a my best friend, and me, you know it's not like i'm arrogant or anything, i just wanna be the center of attention.
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kipshasz
Undefeatable Hero
Elvin's Darkside
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posted March 25, 2014 03:13 PM |
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what needs saving is HC from herring.
I feel offended by these texts, therefore I demand a silencing and a penalty to herring.
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"Kip is the Gavin McInnes of HC" - Salamandre
"Ashan to the Trashcan", "I got PTSD from H7. " - LizardWarrior
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 25, 2014 03:14 PM |
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Edited by Herry at 15:17, 25 Mar 2014.
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i didn't insult you, and even if i did i'll be equally insulted in the story, you will see...
you know being the guy who loses in 60% of the battles cause of more and more opponents stronger than him insults me quite badly, i'm willing to take it
EDIT: and what about you insulting me 4 times? i don't understand how you get to escape intact and i'm the dog who gets kicked around.
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OhforfSake
Promising
Legendary Hero
Initiate
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posted March 25, 2014 03:18 PM |
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Yay! I'm part of the story.. sorta.  At least this time, I'm not some pervert trapped in a cage. ^^ http://heroescommunity.com/viewthread.php3?TID=35930
Thanks for sharing, good to see your posts improving this fast, it was a good read.
I don't think making it a HoMM3 map would be the best way, mainly because it's my feeling that most of us can't be bothered finding the game again, because it's a rather ambitious project to partake before having had previous maps evaluated and finally because it may take way longer than what the interest level of the idea contains.
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Living time backwards
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kipshasz
Undefeatable Hero
Elvin's Darkside
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posted March 25, 2014 03:20 PM |
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No, infact I'm not offended. the whole of HC is offended by this crap.
I bet that my barely literate little brother could write a better story.
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"Kip is the Gavin McInnes of HC" - Salamandre
"Ashan to the Trashcan", "I got PTSD from H7. " - LizardWarrior
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The_Polyglot 
Promising
Supreme Hero
channeling capybara energy
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posted March 25, 2014 03:41 PM |
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Post it in the Glade and see if people join up for a full-blown RP  
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mvassilev
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 25, 2014 03:44 PM |
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bloodsucker
Legendary Hero
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posted March 25, 2014 03:47 PM |
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The central idea seams good, u are just being lazy shortning the path.
Look for "The Pen and the Sword" in Maps4Heroes to see an example of a map that tells a story.
Be ambicious with your project, not with the rewards you would like to obtain from them...
You can decide how you want the map to develop and then use the map generator to create example after example until u find a configurationn that can be transformed in the base terrain for your idea.
The long and dedicated work is nerds heroic path...
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Stevie
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 25, 2014 03:54 PM |
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Edited by Stevie at 15:55, 25 Mar 2014.
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The usage of HC members' names makes me think this is a mockery. If this behavior doesn't get penalized then I will happily abuse this method to make fun of others. Simple as that.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted March 25, 2014 04:02 PM |
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This is relevant to the discussion
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 25, 2014 04:57 PM |
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thanks, bloodsucker and ohfor, but lexxan, your signature is SOOOOOO suited to your post, not to mention the signature is suited to the situation of both, and stevie if you will do that, i have no problems since i'm not responsible nor did i try to urge you to that path, so if you take a penalty while doing it, you are all alone, and don't thank me, that's how friends act and kipshasz, it seems like the whole HC you are talking about doesn't feel insulted, and even if they did i meant no insults.
and by the way i heard in a song "if you want to see some action, gotta be the centre of attraction", so i go ahead and do it
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master_learn
Legendary Hero
walking to the library
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posted March 25, 2014 05:27 PM |
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The_Polyglot said:
Post it in the Glade and see if people join up for a full-blown RP
What about Herry? 
On second thought-noone except me watched the video Poly posted?
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"I heard the latest HD version disables playing Heroes. Please reconsider."-Salamandre
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OhforfSake
Promising
Legendary Hero
Initiate
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posted March 25, 2014 05:53 PM |
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What vid?
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Living time backwards
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Celfious
Promising
Legendary Hero
From earth
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posted March 25, 2014 05:55 PM |
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You just reminded me of the Berserk comics with that farie and always pestering gutts except you dont heal or anything
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What are you up to
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master_learn
Legendary Hero
walking to the library
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posted March 25, 2014 06:04 PM |
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OhforfSake said:
What vid?
Thanks for Poly for posting this video.
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"I heard the latest HD version disables playing Heroes. Please reconsider."-Salamandre
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OhforfSake
Promising
Legendary Hero
Initiate
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posted March 25, 2014 06:05 PM |
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Oh right, I thought you meant in this thread. Yeah that one was pretty hilarious.
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fred79
Disgraceful
Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 25, 2014 10:38 PM |
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Herry said:
"Look, i'm telling you, we need to find a solution, so calm down." clarifies fred.
lol.
i think this story has good potential. i second the "glade" idea.
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 26, 2014 07:30 AM |
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yeah i said calm down cause you guys told me to calm down, so i told myself to in this story
i'm gonna think about what happens in Chapter 1...
and people are gonna have super powers! guess what? I GOT ULTIMATE TELEKINESIS!(including any other form of blablablakinesis, you know like biokinesis, and even ASTEROKINESIS... autokinesis also  , i'm unbeatable  )
fred also has an awesome power, he can control zombies, as the KING OF ZOMBIES!
but i don't know what power ohfor should have..... it's ok he can have ECHOKINESIS
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bloodsucker
Legendary Hero
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posted March 26, 2014 10:39 PM |
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Herry said:
i'm gonna think about what happens in Chapter 1...
and people are gonna have super powers!
Your story is getting worst (if possible).
The writer shouldn't describe what he is going to put in the story, it must use it in the right moment to surprise the reader.
If this poor argument is suposed to be presented as a story... I steel think u could use it to make a good argument for a map instead a losy shortstory.
Ok, that would need some work...
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 02:57 PM |
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Edited by Herry at 16:49, 27 Mar 2014.
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Ok guys here you go it's Chapter 1, i hope i can finish it within the time i have, otherwise i will tell you that it's unfinished.
oh and blood i have already covered that surprise with an even other surprise
so here you go!
While walking in one of the streets of Heroictown, Herry saw people screaming in panic, he raised an eyebrow, 'what the **** is going on?',
He disapeared in a flash and reapeared near the scared people.
>>note, ok i'll explain how i "flashed", i said i'll have autokinesis, right? it allows you to manipulate energy, in this case you put a bit of energy in your feet depending on the distance and speed then charge at high speed...
"What's up? I've never saw such terror in anyone's eyes..."
"Th-th-there i-i-is an a-a-army of b-b-bandits a-a-attacking us!", one of them said, Herry could feel the fear in his voice, he wanted to confirm this so he "flashed" to the town entrance and pulled out his binoculars and zoomed-in to the route leading to the city, it was no lie. people with black jackets reaching till their knees and covering their bodies with masks are walking, it was an ARMY! they even had a catapult, some bandit-style cavaliers,armored bandits riding horses with almost black skin, they would look like wolf raiders, but the size was a big difference, he figured they must be well-trained fierce fighters. about 4 cannons were being pushed towards a good place to fire behind some rocks.
>> note, underlined text along with caps means a loud shout.
"****, I NEED TO TELL OTHERS ABOUT THIS!!!"
'Why would bandits attack us? is it revenge? something bigger and more dangerous???!!'he was thinking of possibilities but he stopped his train of thoughts and quickly opened a portal using his asterokinesis powers to inform others...
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*meanwhile at fred's house*
fred was reading a book about zombies, he wanted to know his strengths and weaknesses to be more careful in latter battles, only to get interrupted by Herry that just got out of a portal, "FRED!! THE CITY IS BEING ATTACKED BY AN ARMY OF BANDITS!" Herry shouts right in his face, "Hey wait a second, you don't m-" he was quickly interupted by the currently "Insane" Herry, how could he be not? the lives of at least hundreds of members was in danger, Wasting time was not an option.
"WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR CHITCHAT! FOLLOW ME!"
Herry pulled his friend towards the portal, which disapeared as soon as they entered. Not a minute after, they escaped from the portal on the other side of the town. Herry at least calmed down a bit...
"Here's What we're gonna do, you close the entrance to the town and taking any other security measures, i'll go inform others."
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>> so what do you think? i left you in a situation filled with hype , well i figured getting revenge includes war, and that's exacty what i'm writing, you know being mad includes not knowing is the enemy and who is neutral so the Members/Citizens of Heroictown are gonna get incuded, i sure love acion  , anyways, any questions, post em. hope the first chapter was good , and i want to tell you something so that we don't get into a confusion, the first post of the thread is but an introduction, and wasn't chapter 1, this was.
anyways wish me luck and success with the story  , Herry out. whatever you say, i'm proud of this story , it sounds quite epic and good to me. well i won't get too full of myself or as they say, arrogant.
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