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Lexxan
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Unimpressed by your logic
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posted March 27, 2014 03:27 PM |
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That write-up needs more BB code. It doesn't have enough of it.
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 03:38 PM |
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ok i've added a bit of them if that satisfies you, hope it does  , but tell me, what do you think? what are you expecting? i said that but none but you did, you didn't even give a complete review...
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LizardWarrior
Honorable
Legendary Hero
the reckoning is at hand
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posted March 27, 2014 03:58 PM |
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I believe that was sarcasm, Herry 
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 03:59 PM |
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Edited by Herry at 16:02, 27 Mar 2014.
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it wasn't, i'm dead serious, and this isn't the wastelands... i guess none can hold their will to spam...
and my god i have to say this over and over, give me your thoughts dammit!
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Sandman
Known Hero
Fearsome Warrior
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posted March 27, 2014 04:06 PM |
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I personally think this the best of all your ideas Herry 
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 04:07 PM |
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thanks, the 3rd(or the 4th?) praise/compliment! YAY!
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kipshasz
Undefeatable Hero
Elvin's Darkside
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posted March 27, 2014 04:10 PM |
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Lexxan said:
That write-up needs more BB code. It doesn't have enough of it.
Indeed it does, clearly it lacks more of BB codes. try harder.
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"Kip is the Gavin McInnes of HC" - Salamandre
"Ashan to the Trashcan", "I got PTSD from H7. " - LizardWarrior
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 04:15 PM |
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look, i need to explain a point here, writing a story is about story telling, the way you express things using free-style and creativity, interestingess, and all that stuff, not decoration and flashy ****.
at fanfiction.net, stories are mostly written in plain old text with little to no decoration with BB codes, so yeah there you get it, i'm not gonna focus on that. i'll clear another point, you can't be perfect in everything, so if the story is perfect in style, colors, decoration and **** then i presume it will be complete **** to a reader, you can't focus on many things at once, and this is the point, so no i don't care about BB code.
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mvassilev
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Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 27, 2014 04:35 PM |
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No, it really needs more BB code. This isn't fanfiction.net, so you're not bound by their restrictions.
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Eccentric Opinion
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 04:38 PM |
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hey look here a second, i got the feeling you betray me  when adrius wrote his story about that assassin that killed someone's dad and the child wants revenge and bla bla bla, it didn't contain a single bit of BB code, and ya didn't say anythin' 'bout it, so do ya' feel like explainin'?
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mvassilev
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Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 27, 2014 04:39 PM |
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That was different. It was a different story and a different time. Your story needs BB code.
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 04:41 PM |
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and let me get to this straight, i already gave it some BB code, what else do you want?
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mvassilev
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Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 27, 2014 04:42 PM |
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More BB code, like I said. You're the writer, so you would know better than me as to where to put it.
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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted March 27, 2014 04:49 PM |
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ok got some BBs, not all of them but i really gotta go..
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mvassilev
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Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 27, 2014 04:54 PM |
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fred79
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Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 27, 2014 05:30 PM |
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needs more violence. excessive, graphic, violence. and sex. sex with beautiful, passionate women. and nazi zombies feeding-frenzy-ing the organs out of still-breathing catholic nuns. and more horribly insane, out-of-this-world, extremely graphic, drugged-to-the-gills-on-bath-salts-and-pcp hardcore violence.
and 1000x more sex with ball-achingly beautiful, passionate women.
and, more clowns. nazi zombie clowns.
and the stay-puft marshmallow man. for the final orgy scene. cover everyone in his marshmallow goo. 
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kipshasz
Undefeatable Hero
Elvin's Darkside
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posted March 27, 2014 05:40 PM |
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fred79 said:
and, more clowns. nazi zombie clowns.
nazi zombie hipster clowns.
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"Kip is the Gavin McInnes of HC" - Salamandre
"Ashan to the Trashcan", "I got PTSD from H7. " - LizardWarrior
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted March 27, 2014 05:52 PM |
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okay, thanks fred you just ruined all of it. 
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fred79
Disgraceful
Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 27, 2014 06:45 PM |
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lexxan, you said ruin, when i think you meant make AWESOME. 
and no hipsters, unless they're being eaten. or force-fed to lexxan.
hey, herry, why don't you write a "reality" t.v. show? i'm sure lexxan would love that.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted March 27, 2014 07:01 PM |
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Fred 4 first boot plz.
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